What do you think of this piece of my story?

I can see that you are writing about horror . I like this extract.i find that this setting is really creepy. and it fits in perfectly.I like any books as long as it's interesting.And this one, I'm sure will keep me awake until i finish it. But i can see some mistakes and misspellings. You should think about getting that grammar checked. It is really good though. It gives me a sense of of well it's just really creepy and i love it. don't think of this as a review or something. I'm just giving my feeling of how this story is.